Comments | smilesofalover: and this is

fibres in smilesofalover

and this is

Jan 11, 2010 20:58

and this is
Yunho/Jaejoong
AU/Romance/Angst; PG-13
7,241 words.
Being the one who waited has always been a painful thing. Yunho had just never known it.

Written for dbsk_secretgame's 2009 Partner Challenge and placed third in the Best Yunho category; prompt was this picture ('come home')

Note: This is only Yunho's POV, so to understand the full story, please go ( Read more... )

genre: romance, fandom: dbsk (2003-2009), pairing: yunho/jaejoong, genre: alternate universe, focus: yunho, genre: angst, length: oneshot, type: contest, rating: pg-13

Comments 21

dilovesyunjae January 12 2010, 05:27:00 UTC

yunho is so patient...frankly, i feel like strangling jae..love sure is crazy...

fibres January 13 2010, 06:09:15 UTC

thank you for reading! :)

hengpor January 12 2010, 05:32:23 UTC

i really don't understand...
why jaejoong left????

maybe I have to re-read it again tomorrow. now time for bed...

fibres January 13 2010, 06:10:17 UTC

ah, please read jaejoong's pov here :D it'll completely explain why he left.

thank you for reading!

jaejoongxyuno07 January 12 2010, 05:39:37 UTC

;-;
wow!
sooo beautiful and sad

fibres January 13 2010, 06:11:03 UTC

thank you for reading! :D

sathien January 12 2010, 19:14:26 UTC

i'm glad with this Yunho version of things. it's good to know he realized what went wrong and worked around with change.

He’ll change, he’ll learn to live around the hole in his life with Jaejoong gone. He owes it to himself, he owes it to Jaejoong, and he owes it to them.

and what i like most is how he became even better than he was pre-Jaejoong. it's just like that in real life, when someone/something happens and your life is totally changed and then that person/event is taken away, you're left hanging because you have been so used to this thing you can't even remember how it was way back. i like how yunho tried to find his identity back and became more as a result. i think that was what jaejoong exactly wanted, reading his p.o.v. of this. and it's good that this piece worked well with the first one.

thank you for giving justice to yunho's side of the story. what it is was epic enough and this just really completes the circle of awesome ( ... )

fibres January 13 2010, 06:27:44 UTC

i'm glad you really liked this. :') "what it is" is definitely hard to give justice to since it's so amazing, but i'm happy you think mine worked!

thank you for reading! :)

yuki_3 January 13 2010, 10:15:55 UTC

Wow..This is just wow
They way you described the broken yunho and how he moved on .. It was just so natural and smooth ..
This brought so many emotions ..
You're really good ..
Now I have to read jae pov to understand his position

fibres January 14 2010, 01:40:11 UTC

thank you for reading! :D ♥ and yes, you should definitely read jaejoong's perspective. :))