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fibres in smilesofalover

the encouragement of revenge

Dec 22, 2012 04:16

the encouragement of revenge
Lay/Luhan
PWP; NC-17
1,904 words.
Yixing wakes up tied to the bed-frame one morning. Luhan waltzes in and has his revenge.

Inspired by this gif.

( It takes a while to sink in, but when it does, Yixing groans and glances down his body - yup, he’s naked. )

focus: yixing, fandom: exo, genre: pwp, length: oneshot, pairing: lay/lu han, rating: nc-17

Comments 28

cruellakyu December 22 2012, 14:33:36 UTC

spot for me because i'm that cool.

cruellakyu December 22 2012, 15:12:44 UTC

THIS IS THE END OF ME.

BECAUSE THIS IS JUST....

MIND BLOWN. IDEK WHAT TO SAY ANYMORE.

I JUST- UGH FUCK EVERYTHING. UGH I CAN'T. THOSE TWO GUYS ARE JUST TOO ASIOGBEGOEBAOG

AND YES FOR YIXING WATCHING PORN. IT'S AWESOME YO, WHAT DO YOU EXPECT ;;

Ugh, too much feels reading this. I'm sorry that this is not a proper comment b-but....

Yeah, you get my point, right? Orz you should make more of Layhan smuts asioghegeobiag kbai

fibres December 23 2012, 08:29:52 UTC

no, this was a perfect comment!! dies, i will try my best, thank you for reading ;~;♥

thoughtsofgray December 22 2012, 15:51:56 UTC

omfg am i coherent am i am i im not sure not really because wow fuck me if that wasn't hot

im not gonna even be willing to apologize for what i just said (or typed) nope

jfc /fans self/ i applaud you for a smut well written (im also a huge sucker for orgasm denial so clearly i enjoyed this far too much. also it's layhan so um OF COURSE IM GONNA ENJOY IT JKFDSJLFDSSS) thank you

fibres December 23 2012, 08:30:49 UTC

nope no need to apologize, i love incoherent comments! eee, thank you for reading and YES TO THE LAYHAN ♥

hipployta December 22 2012, 16:44:55 UTC

DENY HIM MORE LUHAN! He needs to apologize and beg for his crime!

LOL...

I approve

fibres December 23 2012, 08:31:15 UTC

YES, LOL YIXING NEEDS TO LEARN HIS LESSON

thank you! ;~;

horrours December 22 2012, 18:18:23 UTC

... oh my god wow that was like the hottest thing i've read in approximately forever i can't even

just gonna

sit here and reread this many many times

(also i love the way you write luhan. he's perf ok.)

fibres December 23 2012, 08:33:14 UTC

sobs i'm glad you like it so much ;~;♥

(orz thank you for saying so! he's such a ~mysterious character, i can't even)

charliebnim December 22 2012, 18:36:05 UTC

pahahahahaha xD muahahahahah meanie luhan~~~i like him :D

fibres December 23 2012, 08:33:40 UTC

;) everyone likes a mean luhan. thank you for reading!