the glory you give me

Feb 13, 2013 03:17

the glory you give me
Kai/Lay | PWP; NC-17
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Over the course of three days, Jongin is driven wild by the world's refusal to let him orgasm. Yixing placing a vibrator inside him doesn't help. Toy play, orgasm denial, some power play.

For Rochelle (rochellephoon) because teasing her with snippets of this Kaixing PWP gave me such fun, for Jade (huglust) to tide her ( Read more... )

fandom: exo, genre: pwp, length: oneshot, pairing: kai/lay, rating: nc-17

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huglust February 13 2013, 22:13:05 UTC
(hi, jade here. i remade~) MY /GOD/ AMY THIS WAS NOTHING SHORT OF WONDERFUL ;;;;

[...] Jongin silently swears when he realizes the dancing earlier must have stressed Yixing’s waist, and the unrelenting wall against his back is doing nothing to cushion the battering it’s about to get. He gentles his hands when he slips them around to pull Yixing upright, to help him lean against his chest; one step to the right, and they fall on his bed, Jongin taking the brunt of the fall as he lands on his back.

Yixing has clearly noticed what Jongin has just done. Thank you, his eyes say, [...]"

THIS PART WAS NICE AND CUTE AND I LIKED IT A LOT???? Is "cute" even an appropriate adjective for pwp tho, I don't know but I'M SIGHING.

And I'll never see the Kaixing spectrum butt smack the same way ever again. Ever.
Thank you for satisfying my Kaixing needs <3

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fibres February 14 2013, 01:39:46 UTC
hi jade :3

cries IDK I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT. i wanted a moment of legitimate emotion, of caring beyond the sexy tiemz feels, so i'm happy it worked??

And I'll never see the Kaixing spectrum butt smack the same way ever again. Ever.

laughs because that's what i intended. n____n

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byakuya_777 February 14 2013, 01:59:17 UTC
HOLY DAMN!!!! THIS FIC JUST MADE MY DAY, THANK YOU!!!
PS: I love how you added the part of Yixing slap on Jongin's ass, perfect ♥

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fibres February 15 2013, 00:46:17 UTC
i'm so glad you liked it! :D

and i'm just laughing over here on the side about ruining the ass slap for people n__n thank you for reading!!

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antrea February 15 2013, 00:34:55 UTC
OMFG I HATE YOU
SO DIRTY BUT I LOVED IT ALSKSALDS
I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU INTERRUPTED THEM TWO TIMES AND NOW THAT STUPID SPECTRUM FANCAM WILL NEVER BE THE SAME AGAIN GDI AND YOU WROTE SUCH HOT SEX BUT YOU MADE SURE KAI WAS STILL TAKING CARE OF LAY'S WAIST AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH

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fibres February 15 2013, 00:47:40 UTC
I CAN'T HELP IT THE SPECTRUM ASS SLAP WAS THE FIRST THING THAT POPPED INTO MY MIND WHEN THINKING ABOUT KAIXING PORN

and cries bc kai would be the one taking care of yixing u____u

♥♥ lots of love to you toooooo

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kira_min18 February 15 2013, 09:21:07 UTC
FCKINGNGNGNG SCREAEMINGNGNNGNGNGNNGNGNG KAIXING PORN HALPPPPP

I JUST CAN'T EVEN BUT HOLY FUCK THIS IS HOT ASNASNDJKASKSJABJSBAJJASJBJSKNHSCJCJDJCNJSNDDSVBDKNKVD

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING <3333 I LOVE YOU AUTHORNIM!!1!1!1!!!

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fibres February 15 2013, 19:49:45 UTC
eeee i'm so glad you liked it hahahaha

thank you for reading!!

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shirahimejj February 17 2013, 11:24:31 UTC
Loved it~ *Repeats all of the above*

Will go back and laugh at the Spectrum fancam some more~ I mean, he was wearing tights basically...

Please feel free to write the sequel~~~ ^__^

Is Kaixing street dance crew!au upcoming, yes, please? =D

*sends help*

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fibres February 18 2013, 01:56:10 UTC
lmao after this huge pwp, i kind of sweared off writing porn for a while ~_~ but i shall see, since... porn is easiest for me to write lol :c

and yes, i'm working on the kaixing street dance crew!au :3

thank you for reading!! ♥

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