'cause silence is creepy

[smiley_anon]

Haven't posted here or on the meme in a bit. I am writing--just got sidetracked with a fic-trade fill widget. -_- Was supposed to be short, but... I've passed 2K words and am maybe half-done. More likely a third

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[infiniteviking]

..oh my gosh.

Ram always joked that his sense of humor rezzed in before he did.
She’d stood by then, too.
watched with a sinking heart as his opponent tucked, turned, and landed astride the gap
Sorry, program. He asked you.

These are just amazing. Each one beautifully balanced, each character crystal clear, each delivering its own emotional sucker-punch. Putting Look Forward last is a sucker-punch in itself. And your headcanon about programs learning to be themselves and about poor well-meaning Flynn dumping his friends in an unfinished system because ~hey man isn't it cool already~ feels utterly right.

[smiley_anon]

:D Thanks so much! Glad you feel I'm getting the different perspectives right; part of my goal (in addition to learning to write short) was to try and practice how different characters view things. And yeah, Flynn's the most moronic genius ever.

If you're interested in more, I wound up putting it on ff.net... and turning it into a growing thing. There are six (counting these) there currently, more likely to come soon.

[firebird_88]

Lovely, touching, and very beautifully done (and in so little words, too!)

I love the joke about Ram's sense of humor and Tron knowing his purpose before he even fully rezzed. (I <3 Tronzler, too. I don't blame you for having him in everything. xD)