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[smithnjones]

Characters: AU!Bad ass!Martha Jones, mentions of Shephard and Sark. AND Des and the Doctor make cameos. AGH. I need to stop cameoing people in my fics. I fear failing so hard. -_- This is why they have like a few words of duologue. XD
Word Count: 800.................... FAIL. drabble fail.
Notes: Oh, Badass!Martha, it's been so long. It's been too

Comments

[allfireburns]

ARGH, MARTHA. *Flaaaailyhands* I always loved badass!Martha, but oh god, she makes me want to cry. The scene with the Doctor was the best/worst and aslkjresialdfkja;faj.

♥

[smithnjones]

That scene was so hard to write. In all the times that I've written badass!Martha, I never dared to really broach a scene with the Doctor or Des. I think I was afraid it would hurt too much, and it did. >< The Doctor's was the worst because I didn't realize how angry BA!Martha is at him until I wrote that, that she would hate so much about him just makes me feel so AUGH. -_-

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[kawaiispinel]

WAUGH. *FLAILS* I'm with Aubrey. On one hand, OMG BADASS!MARTHA SO AWESOME. But on the other, AUGH PUNCH TO THE GUT. SO MUCH OW.

[smithnjones]

I think there was less awesome of Badass!Martha (though it was totally cool to have a verse where she kills Shephard Bwaha) in this one and more kj;kelrka;. It was really hard to write that scene with Des and realize that she- If she does still love him, it's far past the realm of her ability to feel much beyond those physical reactions that she denies happens.

[kawaiispinel]

Yeah. It HURTS so much. *snugs her* I have a thing for heroes who FALL DOWN SO HARD like that, but it is so painful when you know them so well and know their loved ones and how they used to be with them and sldkfjl;kf;lsdkfls.

*SNUGS MARFA*

[smithnjones]

It does. >< I would love to explore the verse even more but I know there are a lot more specific scenes like that with the Doctor and Des and OW. Not that I'm ever afraid of the Ow, but. -_-

You know.

*HUGGLES* Luckily that didn't end up happening!

And baaaaaw that icon!

[tempered_scars]

*FLAILS*

Holy crap. I don't...think I have words to make the epic comment this time. Just...dayum, girl.

Amazing and flaily and...damn.

[smithnjones]

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Wes.

Hot.

uh.

wait.

...was I supposed to be- OH RIGHT.

Thank you for reading and reviewing and THANK YOU FOR GIVING ME THAT PROMPT. It was an excuse to write badass!Martha again even if this was really only loosely prompt inspired XD, and I had never gone into detail about stuff with her and those two so that was totally cool to see.

*SNUGS* Thank you. <3

[throughworlds]

XDDDDDDDDDD! I am happy to serve.

I saw that quote and I don't know why but I immediately thought of her. I think it's because you showed me that fic of her with the Vengeance Angel, and it still haunts me--in the best possible way--and so I saw it and yeah XD

YAY!

It is just, so brilliant. And badass!Martha is...as;flkda;lskdf;alksdf. Basically.

[smithnjones]

:D You are the best server. Somehow that all sounded kind of dirty.

*SNUGGLES* That is Badass!Martha's fate. Well, she doesn't die there I don't think even if the Breaker thinks she does but. There's not a whole lot left after that. I think she might return to Chicago. I should try to write that fic. HA.

Awwww, *snuggles* THANK YOU. Seriously means the world to hear it. <3

[emilystarr1]

Ow. OW.

I am so glad this isn't ... you know ... actually Martha. 'Cause wow this hurts.

"There's a lot I could say right now," she says, twisting her hands closer to her elbows. She's trembling. Why is she trembling? "But I don't think it will make any difference. Do you?"

THAT. That was my favourite part. The trembling. "twisting her hands closer to her elbows". Just - such a nice little detail and the whole thing was well-written and ... made me glad that you have your Martha. 'Cause reading this made my chest hurt. :p