[fic] for Ai's prompt from forever ago

Aug 03, 2010 10:59

Notes: ER this prompt response is ALL over the effing place. Whateven self. It is helping me to hopefully pinpoint Martha's voice after the event and five days of being gone.

So we live our lives like fugitives and we were born to live like queens.
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throughworlds August 3 2010, 17:12:09 UTC
*FLAILS*

Waugh.

It's really weird that I get Wes bleedover because he's such a ... quiet character in a certain way but whenever there's a Martha prompt I ALWAYS GET THE CHEST HURTING. Before you apologize it's okay, I love it. XD"

Her reactions make so much sense now. It's painful but it makes so much sense, and I actually feel like the prompt response I wrote for him ties in nicely with this.

Fwah. I loved it. <3

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smithnjones August 4 2010, 03:37:21 UTC
*CLINGS*

I won't apologize then. I love making your chest hurt. :x It's payback for all the chest hurting that you give me and that I love. >>"

Yeah, it was really, really helpful writing this out. I think I have one more prompt to do for her so I think after that I might be square. XD" Or possibly CPR meme will help which I still might do tonight or tomorrow to wake these biatches up.

I do think it ties in nicely, and I'm glad that you loved it. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. :> <333

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sophicsulphur August 3 2010, 17:25:38 UTC
Fugitives without having done anything wrong. They all will feel like they have to walk outside with their heads down, darting from one dark alley to the next, never stopping for long, never feeling safe or secure again.

This captured the feel of things right now in the game, at least for someone playing a Wanderer, so well for me.

And I can totes sympathise with something being so important to respond to that you... have a weight on your heart about doing it, and suddenly it becomes an almost unbearable task.

Good, harrowing stuff.

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smithnjones August 4 2010, 03:42:28 UTC
Awww, wanderers. :< I'm really happy that I was able to capture that feel, because I wanted to try to do that even though Martha hardly considers herself a wanderer anymore.

fff, yes! That is exactly what I was trying to show in this, and I'm so happy that it came across correctly as I was worried.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It really means so much to me. <33

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sophicsulphur August 4 2010, 03:45:56 UTC
You are so welcome. :) Just, having someone who's going through that, it caught at my heart, like, yes, and I wanted you to know that. In one sense it's a very personal story, and because it's very personal, it... catches at what a lot of people are going through personally, in an awesome way.

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yetregressing August 3 2010, 20:25:59 UTC
WAUGH.

*flails so hardcore*

I love your Martha. I ADORE your Martha, because she's such a gorgeous character. She's so strong and yet so fragile and it's GORGEOUS. And it comes across so perfectly.

You are an amazing writer. I love you so much, and I love Martha and. *epic flailing* Thank you for this. <3 <3 <3

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smithnjones August 4 2010, 03:44:57 UTC
Awwww, I am so, so happy that you love her, because I love you and I would feel bad if you hated her or something. ._.

*flails right back* Thank you so much. I'm really really happy that those things come across about her. She's incredibly strong, but in the end, she is human, and there's only so much that they can take, you know? :<

Thank YOU for the prompt. <33

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rushtobereal August 4 2010, 06:43:50 UTC
MARRRRTHHHAAAAA.

Um. It is late, I am stupid and incoherent. But nnnnnngh. It just hurts SO MUCH. Stupid Medusa bleedover. ><

I almost wish she would punch out the TV. She's just so very ... quiet and so inner-directed right now that it's painful.

I love that she had to walk away from the journal before responding. Her whole reaction there was so perfectly Martha - I could see it, you know? I loved the image of the ropes tying back her hands. And I love that something that seems hopeful at the end - that she will still go to the army thing - is so very breaky still, because - because she's still not being herself in some way, or somehow, and OW.

Okay. I'm just rambling and a very bad reviewer because I have far too much bleedover. >> But I loved reading this and am happy to see you writing Martha and Medusa ... will someday get her revenge. XDD

<333

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