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Apr 04, 2008 15:13

The porcelain doll sits within the walls of her cruel pink chamber.

The printed animals on the wall mock her with their jovial poses for all of eternity.

Cold is the shelf that has become her home,

Covered in remnants of negligent years.

Time goes on, she remains.

Children grow up, and she remains.

Too fragile to play with,

Too pretty to ( Read more... )

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zarathaz April 4 2008, 23:33:20 UTC
I enjoyed your poem, and thus added you as a friend.

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smoey April 5 2008, 03:31:07 UTC
sweet, always looking for new friends :)

i look forward to reading your poems!

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zarathaz April 5 2008, 04:05:19 UTC
yay, thank you =)

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aponih April 6 2008, 16:39:12 UTC
Aw, that was well done, Smo! Did you ever submit to Exit 51 at Masco? :)

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smoey April 7 2008, 14:06:03 UTC
unfortunately, i did not. i should have though!

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cherry_blue April 7 2008, 04:18:44 UTC
Two-pronged response:

1. DON'T SKIP CLASSES!!! You're paying out of your hoo-hah to go to college, so GO!

2. I do really like the poem, though. :)

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smoey April 7 2008, 14:06:24 UTC
thanks and... thanks? hahahaha.

LOVE YOU.

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