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smoke_baby

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Mar 18, 2007 17:04

Title: Over my shoulder
Fandom: Four Brothers
Rating: PG-13
Charater(s)/Pairing: Bobby Mercer/Jack Mercer
Summary: Character death, major!! movie spoiler
Warnings: Countless nights and a guitar.
Word Count: ~1180

( I'm gonna be a star someday. )

fanfic, bobby/jack, challenge

Comments 17

babi_yami1639 March 19 2007, 15:15:29 UTC

so sad but I loved it.

smoke_baby March 19 2007, 20:21:09 UTC

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it :>

babi_yami1639 April 1 2007, 02:52:04 UTC

I love the last line, not gonna lie, I cried and it was all because of the last line. sooooooo good!

smoke_baby April 7 2007, 14:46:54 UTC

Oh wow, thank you! I feel so very flattered :>

todead2cry October 1 2007, 20:30:06 UTC

absolutely love Jackie. He just seems to always retain this beautiful innocence. My heart totally aches for bobby. the pain is so very real .

lovePEOPLEandCOWBOY anonymous February 7 2008, 19:31:00 UTC

c'est triste et émouvant. J'ai vraiment adoré.