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smoke_baby

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Nov 17, 2009 05:50

just when you're ready to take on the world
Characters/Pairings: Kirk/McCoy
Warnings: Slash. D'uh.
Word count: 669
Rating: R

( It shouldn’t come as a surprise to him, McCoy thinks, when he opens the door to his dorm room one night of many to find Jim Kirk standing in front of it, his lip burst, his nose bleeding, and dark bruises already forming on his cheek and jaw. )

star trek, fic, kirk/mccoy

Comments 7

near_family November 17 2009, 05:34:52 UTC

Ow. That was sad and hurty and really lovely. I enjoy happy (or at least happy ending) fic but it's nice to have a more somber look at their relationship every so often. I really like this.

sangueuk November 17 2009, 07:58:04 UTC

God that was amazing - so few words but poignant and hot. You really captured their dynamic and it was gorgeously paced, Thank you for sharing!

samueljames November 17 2009, 15:34:00 UTC

Very angsty, Jim needs to lay-off the self-destruct button. I'm glad Bones is there to take care of him

eonism November 17 2009, 20:37:46 UTC

I love the language and the tone here. Gorgeous stuff.

syredronning November 17 2009, 22:15:36 UTC

Aw, bittersweet and raw - lovely.