OOC: How's My Driving?

[smokeeasy]

Ye Olde Concrit Post

Think I'm doin' it wrong? Think I'm doin' it right? Comments on characterization, voice, writing, and whatnot can be left here. Comment screening is on, etc., etc.

I reserve the right to comment back (or not) and to take suggestions or not, but I can assure that I am not put off or offended by earnest critique.

Comments

[bulletcarnage]

You suck.
And your brother sucks.
And your alliance chain-smoking sucks.

[smokeeasy]

Watch it man. Or else I won't give you any tea
porn
chocolate cigarettes.

[bulletcarnage]

[smokeeasy]