Dammit, LJ; Fiction

[smokexscribbles]

Damn these popups! DAMN THEM. SUP has approximately five seconds to apologize before I flounce. Disproving what I just said, have some original fiction I wrote for creative writing class. All of my unreliable narrators end up satirical, don't they? The assignment was just to have an unreliable narrator. 700 words, PG-13.

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[thejabberwock]

How do I always manage to read your stuff when I'm exhausted? How does that even pertain to this? Iunno. Bueller.

So I just gave it a quick read-through, and it has me sniggering. The last three paragraphs here were absolutely great. I love how you handled the chain of events - its a great example of alluding to what DIDN'T happen. Did that make sense?

Favorite bit was children = janitors, especially considering how many children have never cleaned in their lives...