"I'm Sorry"

Jan 03, 2013 16:05


“Bye Kalel.”

I closed the door behind me, cringing as I heard a high pitched “Byeeeeee Anthonyyyy!” reply from inside. I sighed and walked out to my car. I was glad to get away. I had been cooped up in the house with her all day, listening to her ramble on and on about her newest creation or some shit like that. I got in the car and revved the ( Read more... )

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mutual_death January 20 2013, 22:58:24 UTC
I agree with dark_vinja, it's kind of sad. But I doubt Kalel is THAT irritating (girls are annoying, though haha!) but I understand you had to characterize her as such to develop Anthony's character, so it's not a big deal.

Good work and I look forward to reading more from you!

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