Hawaii Chapter 1

[smoshslashbabe]

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Comments

[usrnamesarecool]

I like it so far! Can't wait for more :)

[smoshslashbabe]

Thank you! I'll put it up tomorrow hopefully if not Saturday at the most(:

[101giggities]

Ohh...leaves me wondering what will happen. Can't wait:)

[smoshslashbabe]

Haha thanks and don't you worry it'll be out soo(:

[lazah]

I loved it when they both caught each others gazes! :D
But I definately don't like Kalel in this story,I was like; Don't offend Ian like that you bitch ;D
Anyways, I like it so far, more!

[smoshslashbabe]

I know right! I guess I kind of made her bitchy for a reason(; thank you so much && I'm so glad you do!

[lazah]

Oeh, for a reason right? I'm curious to find out what else of evil things she's planning (Poor Ian :D) and until I find out and you post another part of this, I will think about it myself. -Sits in a corner, suspicious staring at your story- :3

[smoshslashbabe]

I guess I just wanted to make the obvious even more obvious... which is that Ian and Anthony should be together and no girl could get between them(; just something along those lines hahaha. And I'm so glad you like it! I have the next two chapters up already so it should be up soon(;

[thestoryliveson]

Good start! You made me eager to find out more about what happens. (:

[smoshslashbabe]

Thank you!! It'll be up soon!

[smoshslashbabe]

thanks! It'll be up soon!(: