Hawaii Chapter 5

[smoshslashbabe]

After the incident Ian went back to Melanie wondering if he had fucked up or done the right thing. Honestly he wanted to run back to Anthony, his Anthony, and tell him everything would be okay and that he forgave him for breaking his heart. Then he would kiss away the sadness in Anthony’s eyes and show everybody that Anthony Padilla was his and

Comments

[ianthonylover]

THIS. IS. SO. GOOD. MUST. HAVE. NEXT. CHAPTER. ^_^

[smoshslashbabe]

THANK YOU! IT'LL BE UP SOON HUN(: haha thanks sweetie

[9800andseagulls]

Wowweeee!
I had forgotton how much I loved this series!
I'm so excited now for the next part! :D

[smoshslashbabe]

Thanks! Holy shit your comment made me soo happy! I'm always very critical with my writing and I never like it so its always super nice when others do!

[girlwhowaitedtv]

Omh, This is so good!!
I loved it so much!!
I can't wait for the next chapter <3

[smoshslashbabe]

Thanks! It'll be up very soon love! Don't you worry about a thing

[perfecttwo]

no ian be with anthony *grabsatissue*

[smoshslashbabe]

Hmmm(; You'll just have to wait and see!

[rahhicecream]

OMGOMGOMG this is sooo good! I can't wait to see what happens next! Haha I've noticed that most of us don't like Kalel but kinda like Melanie :p I wonder why lol

[smoshslashbabe]

haha I think it's because Mel has always seemed more real and honest and Kalel has been known to lie and to exagerate. Plus Mel is in New Jersey so she doesn't see Ian as much as Kalel sees Anthony, she's not that big a threat!
And thanks! I'm so glad you like the story!

[rahhicecream]

Soo true! Oh wow, has she really been known to lie? Like when? :O I havent heard about that yet!

[smoshslashbabe]

well supposedly she lied about her age, her college status and a bunch of other random shit and people always say she's with Anthony only for the attention... haha something like that