I'm wearing the smile you gave me ( Chapter 1)

[smoshy_love]

So hey guys This is my first smosh slashy fanfic Ever, So please comment and all those nice things.

Rating: PG ( NC-17 in later chapters)
Pairings: Anthony/Ian
Genre/Warnings: Slash
Summary: Ian has had feelings forAnthonyfor almost three years and finally works up the nerve to tell him.
Disclaimer: I Do not own Ian or Anthony, though I wish I did. When

Comments

[smorfiett]

Oh, intriguing! Now I have to read the other parts! :-)

[smoshy_love]

You Must! <3

[orangefriday]

Wow, I really think you've got their voices so well!! And the progression and pacing was so good too! I'm interested to see what Anthony's reaction is :)

A little suggestion for next time: you could definitely separate your story into further paragraphs as well as the dialogue (which is amazing!!) needs to be too every time someone new speaks. It'll make everything look neater and smoother to read for the reader.

Aside from that, fantastic first start!!

[smoshy_love]

Oh Wow! Thanks so much, This opinion means lots to me, since you are one of the most amusing writer to read on here, it means alot to know you read my stories, and are willing to give me constructive criticism! :) And I do know that, believe it or not, it just seems I don't do that to much ! :o Because i always forget, I know I'm supposed too, but sometimes I'm a rule breaker ;) hehe Thanks so much and I'm glad you like it <3

[orangefriday]

No problem! I'm glad you already know XD Now remember it! Haha!

[smoshy_love]

I Will! ;)