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Universally Acknowledged (PG-13) (2/2)

Oct 09, 2012 08:24

Title: Universally Acknowledged (2/2)
Author: realmer06
Prompt: "May I ask to what these questions tend?"
"Merely to the illustration of your character," said she, endeavouring to shake off her gravity. "I am trying to make it out."
"And what is your success?"
She shook her head. "I do not get on at all. I hear such different accounts of you as puzzle me ( Read more... )

round five, fic, rating:pg-13, author:realmer06

Comments 15

missdagane October 10 2012, 07:22:43 UTC

Just amazing and brilliant. Love how you use Jane Austen in this fic; make her a squib was such a good idea. I love the flirting, how you make them progress... I love everything in fact.

tigersroar October 11 2012, 04:31:37 UTC

I'll admit, I did a bit of a ditz and accidentally read the second bit before the first. However, that didn't matter even a little as it was all so good! I will say that I enjoyed the first part a hell of a lot (not that I didn't like the second, because I did!). Great job!

melodylaurel October 11 2012, 16:36:49 UTC

This, is absolutely amazing. I love the way you characterized Scorpius and Rose, and I love how you created a Wizard version of "Pride and Prejudice", before, I quote, "the Ministry censored it to death", haha.

I also love how Rose and Scorpius keep running into each other despite barely knowing each other in Hogwarts, and how their relationship develops bit by bit everytime they meet. Scorpius is one hell of a mystery. I like that.

One cool thing: Call me crazy, but I think I know exactly who the author of this fanfic is. I just want to say, I love your Scorose fics. They're so brilliant. Keep up the good work!

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"What has happened between us has happened for centuries. We know it from literature. Still it happens. There are books that describe all this, and they are useless." -Adrienne Rich

"There is no them, just facets of us." -John Green

melodylaurel October 11 2012, 18:24:49 UTC

I can neither confirm nor deny your suspicions.

realmer06 October 31 2012, 22:28:21 UTC

Except now I can. :) Well guessed, melodylaurel, well guessed. I have to ask, though: did you recognize the style of my writing, or did you just notice it was 18000 frickin' words long and go from there?

Thanks for your review, and your oh-so-lovely comments that continue to feed my unbreakable obsession with Scorpius and Rose and finding countless new situations to put them in!

i_am_girlfriday October 11 2012, 17:15:33 UTC

This was really sweet! I loved how you incorporated so many elements into this story and took your time. I really enjoyed its originality.

drcjsnider October 13 2012, 19:55:46 UTC

You totally blew this one out of the water. I adore it. This is just the most awesome story... I was a little disappointed with Rose after that first night with Scorpius, but I'm glad you finally got through it. Really wonderful stuff.... just the right amount of humor and mystery and angst and fluff... great job :)