Slow Fire Burn (NC-17)

Oct 15, 2012 06:21

Title: Slow Fire Burn

Author: ALiquoriceWand

Prompt: prompt

Summary:He tastes of wine, whisky, and the cigarettes she knows he can't seem to quit.

Rating: Mature/NC-17

Warnings: Scenes of a sexual nature

Word Count: (if applicable) About 1800

A/N: Thanks to my beta for turning this round so quickly. Hope everyone enjoys.

Slow Fire Burn )

author:aliquoricewand, round five, rating:nc-17, fic

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tryslora October 15 2012, 13:30:13 UTC
Love how it's about growing up and into the idea of not leaving others behind. Kudos.

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ladielazarus October 15 2012, 15:40:40 UTC
This was absolutely fantastic. Like... brilliant. I've read it four times, and probably will again. :)

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mollywheezy October 15 2012, 21:05:43 UTC
She had come to realise that the sole problem with justice was that it could never, no matter how hard you tried, undo the hurt that had come before. Very true sentiment and very good story to go with it!

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drcjsnider October 16 2012, 00:12:21 UTC
Oh, I like the intensity you show in their relationship... it does sounds like Scorpius is determined that the stress of their jobs won't end up breaking apart their relationship

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enchantedteapot October 22 2012, 15:48:11 UTC
Your writing style is lovely! You get so much inner emotion and atmosphere across in short, elegant sentences. Rose and Scorpius' relationship seems intense, but there's also something soft and supportive about it - the way she worries for him and tries to support him through the trials, even though she'll have her own job to do afterwards. A very lovely insight, well done M.A.

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