as finished as it's going to be

Jul 14, 2007 23:27


Extreme blue envelopes her;

She can’t breathe… She’s entranced by

An untamed restlessness;

her gaze fixating on the tide:

rise and fall, rise and fall.

But she hides behind dusted rims,

unrealized and unrecognized,

holding everything inside.

She peeps out from the thick

veil that has blinded her,

impaling her vision.

She watches but ( Read more... )

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heartofsword28 July 15 2007, 16:58:55 UTC
beautiful...

I love the imagery that mirrors her emotions

"She watches when she chooses, and sees when she likes."

that's my favorite line :)

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smuggled_taxis July 15 2007, 23:42:49 UTC
^_____^

thank you

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