For: izzyisozaki

Aug 26, 2010 14:19

From: sowell
Title: Wrong Turn
Rating: M-ish
Summary: Naruto and Sasuke meet in the desert.
Warnings: Language, violence, sexing. Spoilers for the most recent manga chapters.
A/N: I hope you like it! I fail miserably at sticking to prompts, but I tried to work some of your kinks in.
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summer 2010, rating: m, submission: fic

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itzakukulkan August 29 2010, 14:33:34 UTC
I adored it so much! The dialogues between Naruto and Sasuke are perfect and real. The feelings and the action, everything is very well done. The plot is also credible and the ending is just perfect. It's amazing and lovely story. Thanks for sharing.

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sowell September 6 2010, 17:24:35 UTC
You're welcome! Thanks so much for reading and leaving feedback.

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shinigami002 August 30 2010, 03:58:29 UTC
One of the best IC fics I've read to date. Brilliant!

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sowell September 6 2010, 17:24:47 UTC
Thanks!

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aamyra August 31 2010, 16:29:26 UTC
God, if I'm right about who you are, I wouldn't be surprised at how marvelously in character Naruto and Sasuke were in this story.

This is the kind of "IC" that I honestly, from the bottom of my heart, could say that OH I THINK KISHIMOTO IS SECRETLY THE WRITER OF THIS FANFIC.

Yeah.

So, I loved this. So much. One of my fav fanfic submissions. Great job, author. Great job!

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sowell September 6 2010, 17:25:49 UTC
WERE YOU RIGHT?

Thank you so much. It's so important to me that they seem like their canon selves when I read fic, so I try really hard to keep them IC. Thanks for the lovely feedback!

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aamyra September 6 2010, 21:35:19 UTC
I WAS SO RIGHT /SMUG

<3 I still think it's amazing. I've probably read it like, three times by now haha! No problem!

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soleil_et_pluie September 6 2010, 17:55:22 UTC
I just wanted to say, there is one thing really unique in this fic, and I love: it's so recent. 99% of fics seem stuck in this paused timeline somewhere after the timeskip, after they see Sasuke again, but never right up to the most recent chapters. I don't know, it was really refreshing? To see Kabuto-with-Orochimaru's powers, Naruto and Sasuke talking about their planned fight, and especially Naruto being able to use the shunshin. v. v. cool u_u

Also, you know, it was brilliant and all that. XD Sasuke in particular is prickly but honorable, refusing to fight Naruto until they're both healthy. Like at least he realized that Naruto saved his butt, and returned the favor. :D

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sowell September 11 2010, 20:44:03 UTC
Thanks! It was a last-minute pinch-hit assignment, so I got the chance to use really recent manga stuff.

I don't usually think of Sasuke as honorable, but I do think he has a certain code he lives by that asserts itself at times. Thanks for the feedback!

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istne_pieklo September 6 2010, 19:10:22 UTC
Brilliant, as is everything you write)))) <333

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sowell September 11 2010, 20:44:29 UTC
Haha, you're so nice. Thanks!

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