for: akiru_chan

[sne_mod]

From: atanih88
Title: Funny Way to Fall
Rating: R
Summary: Naruto's favourite late night customer has a set of wings. Yeah. Big ones.
Warnings: Explicit sexual situations
A/N: Hi akiru_chan! I don't think this is exactly what you were expecting to be done with the prompts provided ^^; but hopefully you'll still enjoy : ) Also, thank you very much straw to

Comments

[venia]

@___@ I think I just developed a fetish about featherly-winged!Sasuke. Damn, I love this story so much. Black wings rule.

As well as the muffins and various goodies, I swear I had to compulsively open the fridge and eat something after reading it.

The idea of being able to see souls like that is amazing (I didn't know whether or not to laugh when Naruto said he fell from the 2nd floor, because of the way he said it. It was supposed to be a serious thing -close to death experience maybe?)

THE TOUCHING SCENE TOUCHED A HIDDEN KINK BUTTON SOMEWHERE!!! XD *zomg fangirls forever*

I laughed so much at Gaara's effect on customers XDDDD (yet he has wings! haha I knew it he's good deep down. I don't know why Sakura had a tail but err :\ will try not to pry) I also wish Naruto would quit smoking but okaaay details...

I wish there was more to read. ;___; Will definitely read again, this is so inspiring for a long fic. Thank you, whoever you are!

THIS IS YOUR STRAW

[anonymous]

I LOVED THIS, YOU KNOW I DID. PLUS. SUCH HOTNESS, BABY, SUCH HOTNESS.

[rosalui]

I really loved the idea of this. *_*

[itzakukulkan]

It's a story amazing and original. I loved your way of narrating, the slow pace and clarity of the descriptions and feelings. Everything seemed very real and intense. I adored this beautiful story. Thank you for write it.

[adistoria]

askjahd I really loved this, I think you've had enough of me spamming the crap out of you on msn >_> but seriously *__________* this had me cracking up at Gaara, at everyone really XDD AT SAKURA'S TAIL. I really liked some of the things Sasuke said - I could just see them. I loved the ending line, it was a lovely touch. Really cool fic, the premise was fantastic and you did it justice *________* You kept my attention through out the whole thing. I really liked the touching of the wings scene, it was really guh so hot.

♥

[adistoria]

I may have gotten up at 5am to reread the wing touching >.> it was really hot ._.