for: agent420

Aug 28, 2010 18:27

From: sometimeshatter
Title: Lush
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Naruto is a friendly guy when he’s sober. A couple of beers turn him into a flirt, and a few shots of hard liquor elevate him to the level of a frolicking creep.
Warnings: PWP, drunken shenanigans
A/N: I hope this at least resembles what you were hoping for, dear requester! Many thanks to my beta. You put ( Read more... )

summer 2010, rating: nc-17, submission: art

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venia August 28 2010, 20:04:57 UTC
Mwahahaha *_____* I'm sorry I have no clever feedback to offer, my mind is replaying the whole fic from start. Aside from the obvious hot sexy lemon, I liked the dialogues, there was something that made them different/interesting.

And for some reason their drunkness affected me -- I found the "poking it to death" comment on the insect so hilarious I couldn't go on reading before five minutes.XD

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eris4 August 29 2010, 13:21:26 UTC
LOL, it's wonderful.
I liked Naruto's efforts to make Sasuke jealous, the harem thing, Sasuke's dumbness at Naruto proposing to have sex, the lemon... yes, the entire fic! XD
Good work ♥

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nilladriel August 29 2010, 18:42:00 UTC
I love this and I love you. The sex & characterization are utterly brilliant ♥

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