for: inknose

Aug 29, 2010 16:05

From: fireun
Title: Cocoon
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Belief and trust could build empires, and Konoha was theirs.
Warnings: mild sexual content
A/N: I hope you enjoy!
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summer 2010, submission: art, rating: pg-13

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transient_words September 4 2010, 22:10:45 UTC
Since I've recc'd this to friends, I think you deserve a comment here, too :)

I stumbled on this while whining that were was too little ninjaverse these days - and I was extremely pleased to have read this.

I'll agree with everyone who's commented so far: this is a really soothing and calm read. Your style is very harmonious ... for lack of better word; it flows very nicely and so many of the lines here were nothing short of beautiful.

Especially this:

/Belief and trust could build empires, and Konoha was theirs./

I really liked how you characterised Naruto and Sasuke, making them more mature and yet not changing them all too dramatically?

A very nice fic - thanks for writing!

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itzakukulkan September 5 2010, 01:33:24 UTC
I adored this story. It was just so beautiful. I liked the intimacy, trust, tenderness, understanding between Naruto and Sasuke. It's a gorgeous story. Thanks for sharing.

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fieryredqueen September 8 2010, 00:31:47 UTC
You give such good Sasuke. :D Your Naruto is perfect also.

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