Comments | snakewhissperer: instep

snakewhissperer

instep

Oct 09, 2009 15:54

Instep ( Read more... )

flame, instep, jeremy and christina

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claw_dance October 13 2009, 03:01:21 UTC

Very nice. Looking forward to more on this one :)

asianprincess61 October 14 2009, 21:15:56 UTC

Hello, hello, hello! :D I am AsianPrincess61, and I will be one of your editors for this week ( ... )

snakewhissperer October 16 2009, 19:08:56 UTC

Hey,
Sorry for the delay and thank you so much for the edit. I appreciate the comments and I"ll try and work them in for this week and next weeks entries! I love this kind of constructive feedback.

asianprincess61 October 16 2009, 23:50:13 UTC

Hey! :D Don't worry about the delay. We all know how life wants to drag us around doing this and that! Heck, it was happening to me today!

You're very welcome! I'm glad I could help! :D

snakewhissperer October 18 2009, 00:03:23 UTC

PS, this is part of the second or third book i'm planning on writing. It will deal with their relationship mainly.

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starriheavens October 18 2009, 00:17:31 UTC

Hi, I'm one of your editors for this week. :) Please feel free to ask any questions you have with my edit! :) Sorry it's a bit late :( O-chem midterm, a screwed up computer, and many other real-life problems decided to eat me ( ... )

snakewhissperer October 19 2009, 19:30:42 UTC

No worries on being late, midterms always come first! and i had my own version fo organic chemistry to finish - 1320 bars of soap! hope yours are over now?

Glad you liked it, and yes, Christine and Jeremy are intimate- very! LOL.

Formatting appears to be an issue I need to work on, so your feedback is very helpful in that regards! Thank you. What would you say would be good rules on 'when to start a new paragraph?

I definitely don't want to cause eye-strain!

English is a good point - and one I should have known. But thanks for picking it up, the more the merrier. As to more prominient imagery, I'll see if I can work that in for the next few prompts. Thank you!

starriheavens October 19 2009, 20:18:17 UTC

Haha, I have a few more midterms to go, but they're a week or so from now, which gives me plenty of time to play with writing! :) Life has finally decided to not eat me, but instead just nibble at me a bit. Very much relieved ( ... )