you know the plot is catchy. it's interesting and has a lot of characters. But I think you need to work it bit on the details? you still have a lot of place to improve ^^
keep writing okay? some weeks from now, you'll realize how you've changed!
I know...that's the thing I was worried about that stopped me from posting it. But details actually use a lot of energy and all, so I tend to shorten it...
But thanks for the comment :D I'll do my best to keep going
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keep writing okay? some weeks from now, you'll realize how you've changed!
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But thanks for the comment :D I'll do my best to keep going
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