Shattered Trust - Chapter Six

[snapesgrrl]

Title: Shattered Trust

Comments

[anonymous]

Oh thank you! After finishing HBP, one of my first thoughts (after my brain finished spinning, of course) was "I really hope Shattered Trust goes on." I think we all need it. This chapter was wonderful, I'm glad to see Dria warming up to Snape. I'm very interested in the Joshua situation. Great job.

[reddwarfer]

OMG I want more now!!! I want Severus to curse Joshua to oblivion.

Leila

[xikum]

Just because he showed up by surprise, Joshua has no right to try to make them change their plans, that were already long set. Hope he doesn't even try---but then, he appears to be a bit of a fool. Actually, showing up like that without even any advance call of any sort, is quite rude, esp. in light of what Harry had written in his letter! I can understand the sentiment, but he's best at least be honorable about being sent off, after at most a brief conversation. Just because he took it into his hands to take a plane, does not mean Harry owes him one bit more than he has already done, and actually shows little respect for Harry

[aliciamasters]

I hope Severus points out Josh's lack of manners in a most dignified way; it will make Josh look worse!

Thanks for the song. I remember it most fondly from an episode of "Ghost and Mrs. Muir." Candy Muir had a crush on a boy from England, and the Ghost made him dream about falling in love with Candy while singing this song. Quite charming. True love between eight-year-olds!

I am looking forward to the next update. Thanks!

[gershwhen]

This was a wonderful update!! I liked how you had Harry too uncomfortable to use the master bedroom at the house. This was also a pleasure to read after HBP and I was hoping the book hadn't made you want to abandon this story.

I love seeing Harry interact with Dria and look forward to the next part!