black crush.

[snapmagic]

HousexWilson. Rated R for sex + language.
[But mostly just the sex, m'dears.]

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I like the cool and heft of it, dull metal on the palm,

And the click, the hiss, the spark fuming into flame,

Boldface of fire, the rage and sway of it, raw blue at the base

And a slope of gold, a touch to the packed tobacco, the tip

Turned red as a warning light, blown

Comments

[day_and_a_half]

Hhsdhgljdtbdxbcmccdcdskt...!
Guh.
Too brilliant for words ♥.
Coming back to read it again later - when my brain isn't fuzzy anymore from all kinds of love this piece is.

YOU WIN.

[agent_wilson]

Excellent :) Thanks so much for sharing :)

[ladyxofthexgray]

Oh very very nice and in my opinion; very in character

[stackcats]

Very nice fic! And very in character.

May I offer a tiny piece of constructive criticism? You have several instances of a sentence like this one:
"forcing House deeper into the mattress, who was twisting in the sheets below him"

This makes it look as though the matress is doing the twisting, when of course you mean House. You could write "Forcing House, who was twisting in the sheets below him, depeer into the mattress".

But that little niggle aside, I liked this a lot! I haven't read any fic at all in a long time, and I'm glad yours was the first I chose to get back into it.

[morinen]

Damn hot.