In Our Bedroom After the War, Part One.

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In Our Bedroom After the War.

A/N: RemusxSirius. Slash. Post-Azkaban. Rated R. Inspired by the album by Stars.

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Prologue: the Beginning of the End.

“Oh the blood and the treasure and the loosing it all. The time that we wasted and the place where we fall. Will we wake in the morning and know what is was for, up in our bedrooms after the war?”

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“It’

Comments

[brighty18]

Oh, I really, really loved that. You moved between angst and humor and romance with such grace that it all felt very natural - like a good indie movie! I'll admit that at first I had reservations, thinking it would be all angsty and depressing, but it SO was not. Yay!

And I really loved this bit: Running his hands over Remus’ bare body, Sirius knew that tonight went beyond need; if there was such a thing. This was devastation, this was needing so bad it burned his lungs. Remus made a strange growling noise in his throat, and pulled Sirius down by his own shirt-collar to roughly crush their lips together.

Nice! I cannot wait to read more!

[giddymorose]

I never thought I'd like Sirius calling Remus 'sweetcakes' but there you go. This was beautifully written. I especially liked this:

It was a rhythm they had lost but newly rediscovered, hearts beating in time, fingertips dragging out notes of tenderness, gentle measures. One, two. One, two.

<3

[xpress_o_zoe]

okay, I read this again and I'm liking it. although it is exactly like a conversation you would have with a certain someone, it's still terribly well-written and magnificent.