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hyunseung/kikwang: like a house of burning cards

Oct 12, 2010 21:58

title: like a house of burning cards
rating: pg-13
fandom: beast
pairing: hyunseung/kikwang, acequeen, etc.
word count: 1612
summary: hyunseung crashes and burns. written for sushikabob89 for this prompt, also dedicated to freefallskyline
notes: apologies for the horrid that is the contents of this fic. i cannot believe i struggled to get to 1k, but there's a first for ( Read more... )

pairing: hyunseung/kikwang, fandom: beast, rating: pg-13

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snapshot October 13 2010, 15:57:51 UTC

you are most embarrassing! falling out of love will be later on in the week! it should be like a ~companion~ piece to this one... if i'm not, you know, lazy... snorts.

I AM ALWAYS ACE JUNIOR HARHARHAR! omg ide, ok, intense angry fic later... i still have to write viva football fic, hahahahaha. dies.

lolpocky October 13 2010, 05:54:32 UTC

that was so good!

snapshot October 13 2010, 15:58:22 UTC

thank you for reading ♥

countrymir October 13 2010, 09:20:00 UTC

well hello there~

i'm still relatively new to the beast fanfiction bit but wow. like all true creeps, i rummaged through all the porn in this fandom because i knew that all the good writing was in ratings r and lower, it seems to be that way in all fandoms lmfao. you're the first pg-13 i read and i'm blown away.

i was definitely right. this is my first time reading this pairing and i'm super pleased. you took the prompt and did an amazing job in playing it up. i loved how you equated the burning fingers with the devil and took that for a bit. it made me think the fic had potential to become a bit idk, darker or pessimistic but the fact that you were able to bring in such a soft and sweet plot was beyond me. it was more than wonderfully executed. i have to mem this as one of my first faves to have something to come back to :3

snapshot October 13 2010, 16:05:12 UTC

your comment really made my morning! (:

incorporating the prompt in with the fic gave me a bit of trouble, but i'm glad you liked it nonetheless! i can see how adding in the bit about the devil could give the fic a little of a dark twist, but i never thought of it until reading your comment.

thank you for reading ♥

vaneszikkipower October 13 2010, 10:45:33 UTC

oooo loved loved it amazing!!!

snapshot October 13 2010, 16:05:34 UTC

thank you for reading ♥

angelicxiah777 October 13 2010, 13:47:03 UTC

Hmm, hyunseung's emotions are too complicated for him, but at least he seems to understand them now. x]

snapshot October 13 2010, 16:06:26 UTC

haha, hyunseung's a complicated person so it would only make sense that his feelings are too :P

thank you for reading!