david villa/david silva: chaining souls

Oct 13, 2010 17:37

title: chaining souls
rating: pg-13
fandom: football
word count: 2063
pairing: david villa/david silva
summary: silva has silly notions about love
notes: lol this is terrible :|, i apologise. for freefallskyline

you learn the subtle difference between holding a hand and chaining a soul )

team: spain, fandom: football, club: barcelona, pairing: david villa/david silva, rating: pg-13, club: manchester city

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elemersglue October 14 2010, 01:59:59 UTC
Yay Davids ♥

Ah, so beautiful (heartbreakingly so) I love it <3

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snapshot October 14 2010, 16:32:37 UTC
i have a soft spot for them ):

thank you for reading ♥

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influira October 14 2010, 03:23:24 UTC
wow, this is absolutely gorgeous. i wanted to quote my favorite bits, but i was basically quoting it all. hahaha. this is exquisite.

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snapshot October 14 2010, 16:33:43 UTC
i'm glad you enjoyed it, as i was a bit iffy with this one! thank you for reading ♥

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coldryuuza October 14 2010, 07:28:55 UTC
this is not terrible!! this is lovely, lovely writing :DDDD what i found most poignant was david holding silva's hand and silva being unable to felt go. it hurt in a good way

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snapshot October 14 2010, 16:34:27 UTC
david holding silva's hand is my favourite bit, so i'm glad you liked it (:

thank you for reading ♥

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snapshot October 14 2010, 16:34:53 UTC
silva will always be precious!

thank you for reading ♥

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theosakansun October 14 2010, 19:07:21 UTC
God. This brought tears to my eyes. It's that beautiful.

I love the way you've written Silva's doubt. Like he cannot believe that he honestly's in love with Villa, and neither can he believe that Villa wants him back.

:)

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snapshot October 16 2010, 00:53:53 UTC
oh dear ): /hands you tissues!

it pleases me to hear that you like this! i was very doubtful about this because it's not a style that i write in often, and i was terrified that i didn't get silva right. i feel like silva will always doubt villa's feelings ):

thank you for reading ♥

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