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[snapsnapsabby]

The beginning of my fic. Unbeta'd. Just wanna give y'all a little taste of whats to come. I'm kinda nervous about it because I just wrote this all real fast and I'm not sure if it's good at all :P

Comments

[rkowhore79]

*flails*

i digg!! i digg!! lol

poor p!! his back has really been getting fucked up!!

but yeah, it's def good..a few grammar mistakes and tense switches here and there...but it's just a rough draft soo..but yea! def loved it and can't wait for more of it. i's intrigued....new fic idea is new. and awesome.

[snapsnapsabby]

I knows I knows. I pretty much copied whatever I wrote on my sidekick onto here. XD

Hahaaaa you pitty teh p. :P

I'm glad someone thinks its somewhat good. My beta said i should write it over ;-;

[court_310]

My poor Cooode! Everyone's kicking his ass lately! I can't wait for this =] nice work so far, gah I need to work more on mine!

[eric_idle_rules]

This is really interesting. Like Bella said, there were some grammar errors, but that's nothing that can't be fixed. Otherwise, this is good, and I'm looking forward to more.

[kataclysmic1]

Poor Cody, he's getting beat like crazy rthese days ;p I'm loving it, can't wait to read more!

[snapsnapsabby]

Thank you!
The rest is posted over here;
http://xdreamthextreme.livejournal.com/