Try It Again (Part 3)

Sep 04, 2008 23:24



Here's Part 3 of my story, Try It Again.  Thanks much for the reviews on Parts 1 & 2.

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indigorayne September 5 2008, 21:35:47 UTC
Poor Ryan, he just keeps getting jerked around. Really, really enjoying this story.

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snapsparagus September 20 2008, 01:03:18 UTC
I love your pic. Yes, poor Ryan. He's got it pretty tough here. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and I truly appreciate your comment. :)

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marsalka September 6 2008, 01:53:56 UTC
great update, glad Kirsten is finally getting it

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snapsparagus September 20 2008, 01:03:53 UTC
Yes, Kirsten kind of got smacked in the face with this one, didn't she!? Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

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jonsmom14 September 8 2008, 22:38:51 UTC
Well look who finally opened her eyes and looked down from her ivory tower. Sorry, but Kirsten is really on my nerves in this. I can't wait to read more.

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snapsparagus September 20 2008, 01:04:50 UTC
Yeah, Kirsten's a total bitch so far, lol. Thanks for reading & commenting! :)

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willwork4dean September 11 2008, 18:15:00 UTC
Popping in late to say I'm really, really enjoying this story. It's breaking my heart, but I'm enjoying it, LOL! I'm glad Kirsten finally got a reality check. Ryan begging his mother to choose him, just once, totally broke my heart, and it sounds like it broke Kirsten's too. I hope things start to look up for Ryan in the next chapter.

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snapsparagus September 20 2008, 01:06:10 UTC
Thanks for reading & commenting! It has been kind of a tough ride so far, LOL, but things will definitely start to look up in the next chapter. :)

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beachtree September 19 2008, 20:30:16 UTC
I knew I shouldn't have tried to sneak on to leave a comment. I'll be sure to put this on the list for tonight/this weekend from home. Swear- on Mom!

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snapsparagus September 20 2008, 01:06:39 UTC
LOL - Swear on Mom, huh? I'm holding you to it. (wink)

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beachtree September 24 2008, 20:16:18 UTC
... And then I ended up going out of town. Swear! For real! Ask American Airlines!

I will be reading this- again- so I can actually comment- again.

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snapsparagus September 24 2008, 21:48:43 UTC
LOL! I'll have Part 4 out soon. Then you'll have that much more to catch up on!

But seriously, I'm looking forward to your comments - sounds like you've been really busy - thanks for keeping me in mind.

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