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Taste of Bittersweet (Archie/Jimmy)

Aug 10, 2010 22:04

Title: Taste of Bittersweet
Author: snarkcasm
Rating: PG-13?
Genre: Slash (implied) Archibald "Archie" Leach/James "Jimmy" Ford (I KNOW RIGHT?)
Spoilers: Spoilers for Inside and Three Card Monte Job (if you don't know the characters above, I wouldn't read it if I were you)
Summary: An ex-thief and a bookie walk into a bar.
A/N: As always, reviews are love!
( A month. His own son ran him out of his town a month ago. )

fandom: leverage, fanfic: leverage

Comments 4

sheryden August 12 2010, 07:51:51 UTC

I like how this came out. Nicely voices, and I liked the flashback with wee!Nate. You should definitely do a follow up.

snarkcasm August 12 2010, 13:36:17 UTC

Thanks dear! I didn't know how to end this sucker, so the last two snippets seem a little disjointed. I really wanted to talk about Nate's mom and Nate from Da's perspective (Nate would have been 32 when his mom died--using T. Hutt's actual age as a baseline).

Maybe if I get wonderful ideas from this week's episode X3!

entropynchaos June 7 2011, 23:50:52 UTC

Oh, my heart! Ow, yet so fantastically written! I WOULD TOTALLY NOT BE OPPOSED TO READING A FOLLOW-UP! ♥

...Why, yes. I am now stalking your journal ;p

Sort of. In a totally non-creepy way, I promise, cross my heart.

snarkcasm June 7 2011, 23:55:34 UTC

Aaaah! Stalker!! Just kidding, dear! XD

For some odd reason, my mind started shipping these two like the dickens. I have one angsty stand-a-lone in this 'verse and I really want to do a Nate/Eliot tie in or something so I can post at the comm, but I haven't written anything Nate/Eliot-y in this 'verse that I liked yet.

Thanks for the compliment. It really means a lot to me!! <333