Please Hear What I'm Trying To Say, a Glee story

[snarkygirl101]

Title: Please Hear What I'm Trying to Say
Author: SnarkyGirl101
Rating: PG
Warning: Spoilers for 2.06!
Word count: 1663
Summary: Based on the prompt of "I want to have an inside look into Dave's head. What has lead up to all this? When did bullying turn into something more?" (Yes, my own prompt.)

A/N: May be a little choppy in P.O.V. Please tell me if

Comments

[alex_s9]

This is the line that made me love Kurt in the TV series" “Hi, I'm Kurt Hummel and I will be auditioning for the role of kicker.”

I knew Dave was gonna fixate on him from that moment on: poor guy stood no chance against the onslaught of the walking fabulousness that is Kurt Hummel.

And I loved the way you described how summer was for Dave, and how Kurt has grown up.

I really enjoyed it. I wish you'd continue. I firmly believe that even Dave karofsky deserves a chance to redempt himself.

[snarkygirl101]

I think I loved Kurt from the moment he walked on screen with that sunglasses shirt, not gonna lie. I'm a sucker for a cute face and great clothing. <3

I have to admit, a lot could have happened over the summer that we'll never see. And I love how no one has pointed out Kurt/Chris growing. Seriously, I swear he's grown a few inches or it's just those boots of his.

Maybe I'll have the chance to go further when I'm not supposed to be studying for exams. :']

[alex_s9]

I was thinking the other day how he seems taller than Rachel and last season he was just her height but I never actually got to checking this.

I do hope you continue this.

[1farmer_girl]

<3 I love how you went all the way back to the beginning and went on from there instead of just analyzing that one scene. I also really like how you can practically feel the angst that Dave is going for. I also just realized this is the first time I've called him Dave instead of Karofsky; the times they are a-changing ^_^

[snarkygirl101]

Thanks! I firmly believe in going back to the source of where things came from- how else would we know what happened for the last episode?

Same here, at the beginning of the episode I called him Karofsky. By the end, it was Dave.

[lunartick1989]

I think you got Dave's thought process down perfectly! This was wonderful!

The one thing that was a little jarring was the tense change from past to present when Kurt joined the Cheerios.

Other than that, it was great! I'd love to see where it goes from here! What's going through his head when Kurt brings Blaine for the intervention?

[snarkygirl101]

Thanks!

Oooh, I knew I was using different tenses, but it was late when I was writing it, so I had no idea where. I must remedy that when I have time.

Ooooh. That sounds like a fun scenario- if only homework wasn't in the way.

[snarkygirl101]

Thank you! I was afraid I was coming off too smart, and I hate to swear, so I was slightly nervous about his perception.

Rambling like an idiot can be quite fun, I find myself telling all kinds of random things to strangers. It's a great way to convince people of your insanity. :']

[arabella_w]

This was amazing!! it was excellent the way you put everything that Dave was going through.

I firmly believe that even Dave karofsky deserves a chance to redempt himself I totally agree with this, so I do hope you continue this

[snarkygirl101]

Thanks!

If I have time, I really want to do more, but it all comes down to what must be done. :]