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oyster_district July 29 2007, 04:44:43 UTC
Can. Not. Wait. :)

Seriously, this is a great framing device and I can't wait to see where it goes.

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snarkyroxy July 29 2007, 04:52:24 UTC
Thank you!

I like the term 'framing device', too... and that's exactly what this was. Nothing much happened in it, but it had to be written nonetheless.

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gidjee July 30 2007, 13:46:03 UTC
I am reminded in the memory within DH of Phineus calling Hermione a Mudblood and Severus telling him not to use that word. This scene really shows the depth of how that single word changed his life. I also like how you included the fact that there was really nothing to show between him appologizing to Lily and him begging Dumbledore before that fatal event. I believe you have really captured all of that in this scene. Incredible Snarky...as usual. Thank you for writing.

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sneaky_rhae August 2 2007, 03:43:17 UTC
Oh, I have a feeling this is going to be great! Can't wait for more.

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