Icarus you fool

[sneakypeaky36]

You aimed for the sun
but the sun can't be caught.
You gave it your best.
But that's all that you've got.

Your wings have been burned
singed black by the sun.
Time to pack up your dream
cause it's over and done.

History will mock you
the idiot you are.
Only a fool thinks he
can fly to a star.

Comments

[elfearz]

thats really interesting. very clever.

[anonymous]

*chanting* more poetry more poetry

oops

[sytzo4life]

that was from me, the previous comment

Re: oops

[sytzo4life]

and that was a dangling modifier

Re: oops

[sytzo4life]

i meant to say,

the previous comment was from me