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[sneakypeaky36]

Concrete.
No questions
Make a statement and stand by it
thats what you think.
Concrete.
My statement:
Two thugs killed a man and dumped him
in the Hudson River. He sank to the
bottom for his feet were encased in concrete.
Concrete.

Comments

[sytzo4life]

ok. better; better than I'm putting out these days.

concrete is such a concrete word. You made it work. Who'd have thought anyone could write a poem using "concrete"

in case you hadn't noticed, I am giving my approval.