mirage

[sniglet623]

first scene

Comments

Good Show!

[phantom167]

Finally, poetry I like.

[sniglet623]

hurray, i'm glad.

[prufrock518]

i very much like the last two lines. its like...delicately raw. is it stylistically inspired by someone? it sounds familiar (thats not to be miscosntrued as me saying youre not original)

[sniglet623]

damn, iza, your ear is flawless. i wrote the last two lines first. the last line isn't mine at all, actually, it's wonkette's, of all things. but i liked it.