Comments | snoaz: Fic for the melancholic season

snoaz

Fic for the melancholic season

Oct 30, 2013 21:00

Title: Mirages
Character(s) / pairing(s): Green / Red, the Oak family.
Rating: PG
Word count: 1868
Note: apparently this was a story I needed to get out of my system. Too many Green and Green/Red feelings after watching Pokémon The Origin (which I highly recommend and which ought to have been longer than just the couple of episodes, thank you very ( Read more... )

fanfiction, pokemon

Comments 2

aetherling November 14 2013, 03:58:39 UTC

Love it! Those two...sigh. Too many emotions to handle lol. I like how you interspersed parentheses throughout to give a sense of how jumbled Green's feelings are and ended with the breaking of their friendship.

snoaz November 14 2013, 19:38:35 UTC

Thanks a bunch! I wish this fic were a bit happier, but then their drama writes itself. 'Too many emotions to handle,' I'm with you there.

Glad you got a jumbled kind of feel from the fic, as Green's thoughts on Red are indeed far from clear. I feel like I still haven't explored everything from their dynamic so maybe there'll be a follow-up fic...

Thanks again! ♥