Of Whispered Promises

[snoaz]

Title: Of Whispered Promises
Character(s) / pairing(s): Falkner/Janine
Rating: PG
Word count: 694
Note: Part of fictrade with ibuberu. Prompt:  "the promised place". (Why am I so nervous posting this? Because it's the first time I've ever written a fic for someone, haha.)
Summary: They think of their fathers, and they think of each other.

Comments

[xxkof_feexx]

*Sigh* That last part took my breath away. Seriously, these two are o awkward yet sweet and innocent, it's so beautiful. Reading this made me suddenly imagine a future of Janine and Falkner, married, together, and just different from their own parents. Thanks for writing this!

[snoaz]

Yes, they're so awkward together... but that's one more reason to love them. Plus, it's actually canon (- kind of) in both manga and game. Pretty rare, that :D

I was happy I could write something for this pairing, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. <3

[ibuberu]

I honestly really liked this; it was short and sweet, but managed to cover a lot about their characters and their relationship. I liked how their fathers shaped the way they thought about love -- and Janine and Falkner each had so unique and accurate opinions, it was wonderful (:

I especially liked the line 'The Fuchsia Gymleader may cross the mind of the Violet Gymleader once (twice), and it might happen vice versa, but -- that is not thinking.' Ahhh, the denial is evident and somewhat humorous :D

The ending was really the cherry on top. I loved this, great work Snoaz ♥

[snoaz]

Thanks, it means a lot. Glad you liked it, since that, after all, was the intention behind writing it at all :D

(Though it also made me realise I should try more pairings, and I'm kind of wanting to... there goes my free time haha)