Good Gods every home should have a Bill. I loved this line "a quivering puddle of blissed-out nerves". Just sounds wonderful, such a great choice of words, but of course you had to stick the dagger in my heart with the last line "She didn't have many left." Sniff!! There should be no crying in porn!!
Oh gods...I'm sorry about the tears. I kept waffling about that line but in the end decided to go with it. And I love that turn of phrase you picked out. I'm so glad it struck you as well!
Oh I think it was the perfect line to end with. I was just floating along reading, la la la and then reality whacks me the head. Very BSG and very Laura and Bill. It's one of the best things about their story, they don't have forever, not even close to it, but still find something so beautiful with so little time.
That's exactly what I hoped to convey. They have so little time, and yet they come so far and mean so much to each other. It really is such a heartbreaking and human romance. I adore them.
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Where the FRAK is my husband.......
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Seriously though, I'm so happy you enjoyed the sexytiems!
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Oh gods...I'm sorry about the tears. I kept waffling about that line but in the end decided to go with it. And I love that turn of phrase you picked out. I'm so glad it struck you as well!
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Just yeah. Wow.
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