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snoopy0917

Better Left Unsaid (9/12)

Mar 10, 2010 20:46

Title: Better Left Unsaid (Part 9/12)
Author: snoopy0917Pairing: Bill Adama/Laura Roslin ( Read more... )

Comments 34

bibliodragon March 11 2010, 17:09:39 UTC

Rawr, I'm impressed at such hotness at such an awkward, depressing time for them, and you counterbalance the angst and the hotness so well.

snoopy0917 March 12 2010, 02:44:51 UTC

Thank you so much! It's a delicate dance. I'm so happy you think I pulled it off.

cutemaggie March 11 2010, 19:19:45 UTC

ohhh yeahh :) that was great :)
I don't know how are doing this but your imagination is really wonderful, ohh I hope they had moments like this one and those in chapters before, ohh I really hope that &hearts

*hugs*

snoopy0917 March 12 2010, 02:48:27 UTC

Oh thank you so much! I really love to think that they could have had moments like this.

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snoopy0917 March 12 2010, 02:56:24 UTC

Thank you so much! *blushes*

tjonesy March 12 2010, 01:28:39 UTC

For the most part I think you really nailed the dialogue here in the middle of the sexytiems. There are very few fics where I find their conversations or utterances during sex to be in character. This is one of them.

snoopy0917 March 12 2010, 02:58:43 UTC

Thanks! It's so important for me to try to keep them in in character, even in the midst of sexytiems. I'm so glad that you're enjoying it and that it's still working for you.

37_soul_sister March 12 2010, 03:57:50 UTC

ummm, can I have Bill come over to my place later tonight? Please?

snoopy0917 March 13 2010, 02:57:41 UTC

LOL, I'll send him over after I'm done with him...

Thanks!