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snoopy0917

Better Left Unsaid (10/12)

Mar 11, 2010 20:57

Title: Better Left Unsaid (Part 10/12)
Author: snoopy0917Pairing: Bill Adama/Laura Roslin ( Read more... )

Comments 26

miri_d March 12 2010, 05:59:51 UTC

I cried, you batch >O. Nobody makes Miri cry this is a blatant untruth because I have been known to cry at angsty things before.

Also, ignoring the fact that you wrote these before you started posting them because it makes my angry comment irrelevant, WHERE IS TEH FISTING?!

legallybea March 12 2010, 06:47:33 UTC

LOL! As LJ loaded my comment below, I saw the last sentence in your comment and nearly did a spit-take onto my laptop. Well played.

PS. Love the icon.

snoopy0917 March 13 2010, 02:45:30 UTC

I'm sorry this made you cry but I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

legallybea March 12 2010, 06:44:26 UTC

I love this! It's so incredibly real, with such affection running as an undercurrent to both Bill and Laura's frustration.

The last two paragraphs seem especially in character for Laura. Thank you for sharing. Fantastic as always.

snoopy0917 March 13 2010, 02:47:16 UTC

I'm so glad you're finding it real. I tried to keep this story as grounded and realistic as I could manage, as well as staying true to the characters in canon at this juncture (while still giving them some happy sexytiems) It means the world to me that you're finding the characters in my writing.

Thank you so much for reading!

bsg_aussiegirl March 12 2010, 07:46:09 UTC

Another great chapter.

I loved how Laura wanted Bill from the beginning. That's definitely canon baby.

I loved her memories about their fantastic secksing once again. They deserve it.

I love how Bill is still the best boyfriend ever - trying to be understanding 'I don't need sex, Laura'.

I love how they still can't talk to each other. That is SOOOO them.

snoopy0917 March 13 2010, 02:49:24 UTC

You know Laura thought about it in the beginning. At least once or twice. There's just something about Bill Adama...

These two say so much without words. And then there are the words they refuse to say. They really fascinate me in a lot of ways. They're so complex and imperfect and real.

Thank you so much for the lovely comment.

37_soul_sister March 12 2010, 08:21:33 UTC

pardon my language, but holy shit!

that very difficult task was expertly handled. well done. *claps*

Sex was how she told him things. The things she wasn’t able to say, wasn’t able to voice. The things she wasn’t able to face, even in the safety of her head. It was consuming. The passion. The desire. Laced with meanings and emotions she couldn’t process.
She didn’t know how to communicate anymore.

wow. this completely knocked me out. bloody brilliant.

snoopy0917 March 13 2010, 02:51:47 UTC

wow. this completely knocked me out. bloody brilliant.

Thanks! I was trying to reconcile Laura the sexual flirt/aggressor with Laura the emotionally walled-off recluse. Sometimes physical expression of emotion is just easier than actually acknowledging, processing, and verbally expressing the same feelings. I'm so glad I could bring this through.

I'm so very glad you've been enjoying the story!

mairim2492 March 12 2010, 19:09:38 UTC

I really LOVE this story, seriously, It's amazing.
the last part is ..wow so deep I can't explain myself better sorry.
Thank you for write this.

snoopy0917 March 13 2010, 02:55:21 UTC

Thank you so much for reading! I'm so very glad you've been enjoying the story. I'm so touched by your lovely comments.