BSG Fic...

Jun 06, 2009 14:40

He’d been avoiding her.

Bill was subtle about it.  Almost strategic.  But it was undeniable.  He found flimsy excuses not to come to her ship.  He rescheduled their meetings to the middle of the day.  He brought along a chaperone.  Saul.  Lee.  Even Helo for frak’s sake.  He was the last one in the door and the first one out.  He’d found every ( Read more... )

kinkfic, bsg

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just_smth June 6 2009, 20:17:06 UTC
An idiot. Right. I second (third?) that. If he really thought avoiding the problem is going to solve it in that case... Well, what can I say besides idiot? Oh, I know. We need a sequel. About Bill figuring it out and paying Laura a visit.

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snoopy0917 June 6 2009, 22:32:23 UTC
Well, what can I say besides idiot?

Not much. Oh Bill...you wonderful, adorable, frakking moron. (((Bill)))

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. A sequel? Hmmm...I'll have to think on that. Luckily I have a few other things in the queue...

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peelthelabel June 6 2009, 20:22:38 UTC
I'm just...

*is dead*

TO HOT TO HANDLE!!! I mean SERIOUSLY
It's like I'm in A/R pornheaven.

WILL NEVER BE THE SAME AGAIN.

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snoopy0917 June 6 2009, 22:40:23 UTC
Heee... Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the kinky!porn.

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altitudeandwine June 6 2009, 20:26:24 UTC
This is a whole new level. The smut was mind shattering, and on a psychological level this was so human, so true.
Awesome!

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snoopy0917 June 6 2009, 22:42:19 UTC
on a psychological level this was so human, so true.

Thank you so much for this. It was very important to me to try to make this realistic and in-character. The great thing about Laura and Bill is that they are so very imperfect. I'm glad you enjoyed.

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larsfarm77 June 6 2009, 20:30:04 UTC
Can I just say that I love this?

He deserved every bit of this for that speech, and I love how you balanced the anger, tenderness and HOT. Perfect.

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snoopy0917 June 6 2009, 22:43:43 UTC
Can I just say that I love this?

Yes. But only if you accept my profound thanks. You helped keep me honest and gave me such great insight. The fic greatly benefited from your awesome.

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larsfarm77 June 7 2009, 13:16:27 UTC
Pfft. This was all YOU -- you melted my frakking monitor with all that amazing dirty talk and ... and details ... and yeah :D

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snoopy0917 June 7 2009, 16:11:57 UTC
Well, thank you. Though I think at least part of the credit should go to our shared smut brain...

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bugsfic June 6 2009, 20:35:17 UTC
Besides the smokin' hawtness, I really really liked the place you but the characters, angry, confused, still not really figuring anything out at the end.

But she still gets to give the final order.

I love this part of the series; the options for fic and their relationship seems endless and oh, so angsty and good!

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snoopy0917 June 6 2009, 23:06:20 UTC
I'm so glad you liked the ambiguity of the end. Things don't always get wrapped up in a big pretty bow. Things are complex and layered. Especially things with these two.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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