Comments | snoopy0917: BSG Fic: Better Left Unsaid (1/12)

snoopy0917

BSG Fic: Better Left Unsaid (1/12)

Mar 02, 2010 20:54

Title: Better Left Unsaid (Part 1/12)
Author: snoopy0917Pairing: Bill Adama/Laura Roslin ( Read more... )

Comments 72

zaleti March 3 2010, 02:33:20 UTC

OMG OMG FINALLY!!! The epic, it has landed! :D Woooo! *does epic dance*

I will be back to comment properly when I am not on my phone...

*dances more*

snoopy0917 March 3 2010, 03:34:29 UTC

Omgs! Flaily Kermit! J'adore!

Thanks again so much for your insight. You rock.

zaleti March 11 2010, 01:21:26 UTC

:D I fail so hard. I'm also laughing, because while reality has kept me from coming back and leaving you proper comments, somehow the epic has become epic-er by the order of two whole chapters! Excellent.

Anyway! I love so many things about this chapter, from the accuracy of the emotional drawing to subversive!romantic!Bill, but I think my favorite part is at the very beginning, where Laura can't stop herself smiling. It's such a wonderful little moment between them, and so easy to imagine.

snoopy0917 March 11 2010, 03:17:21 UTC

LOL...apparently I can't count. This is the crux of my problem.

I love the image of Laura and Bill smiling at each other. It's painted so vividly in my mind and just tugs at my heart each time it appears. I'm so glad you can visualize it as well. I'm so glad you're enjoying the finished product as well. It would not have been the same without your help.

missbevcrusher March 3 2010, 02:58:15 UTC

Oh wow. This is an amazing start. Extremely well written and emotionally evocative. Bravo.

snoopy0917 March 3 2010, 03:37:28 UTC

Thank you so much. This piece is nothing if not emo at times. :) I'm very glad you're enjoying it thusfar. It's really my take on what's going on inside of Laura's head. I hope you continue to enjoy it.

i_am_davnee March 3 2010, 03:06:22 UTC

Woot! Can't believe it's finally here. :D Be back later to remark on all the awesome.

P.S. ((((you))))

snoopy0917 March 3 2010, 03:38:13 UTC

((((you)))))

That is all. :D

And I'm so damn emo about loosing my baby into the world.

i_am_davnee March 3 2010, 03:43:22 UTC

And I'm so damn emo about loosing my baby into the world.

Well you certainly carried it long enough for this metaphor to be apt. ;) And the world is a happier, if more emo place, to greet it.

snoopy0917 March 3 2010, 03:51:38 UTC

*raises eyebrow*

You had to go there, didn't you? Though if anyone's carrying a baby for 15 months...they should probably get that looked at. :P

mascaret March 3 2010, 03:13:10 UTC

Beautiful start.
Can't wait for more.

snoopy0917 March 3 2010, 03:38:43 UTC

Thank you so much. I hope you continue to enjoy it!

katamarann March 3 2010, 03:19:48 UTC

Oh hells yes. Awesome beginning. I'm already emo.

snoopy0917 March 3 2010, 03:39:40 UTC

You think you're emo now? Strap yourself in. The emo keeps-a-comin.

I'm glad you're liking it.