Comments | snoopy0917: BSG Fic: Better Left Unsaid (1/12)

snoopy0917

BSG Fic: Better Left Unsaid (1/12)

Mar 02, 2010 20:54

Title: Better Left Unsaid (Part 1/12)
Author: snoopy0917Pairing: Bill Adama/Laura Roslin ( Read more... )

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miabicicletta March 3 2010, 03:22:27 UTC

I cannot express how excited I am for the next few days.

I love your fics, and am so pleased to have come across this tonight!

snoopy0917 March 3 2010, 03:40:37 UTC

Thank you so much! I really hope you enjoy the rest as well!

lacklusterfic March 3 2010, 03:24:29 UTC

Oh my Gods! I had to remind myself to breathe while I was reading--that's how gripping this piece is.

And there are eight more chapters. I can't believe my luck!

snoopy0917 March 3 2010, 03:41:49 UTC

there are eight more chapters.

Indeed there are. This is the fic that wouldn't end. I nicknamed it "The Epic" for a reason.

Thank you for the lovely feedback. I really hope you enjoy the rest as well.

bsg_aussiegirl March 3 2010, 03:29:52 UTC

That was wonderful. I really can't wait for more. I'm so excited. (This doesn't happen very often anymore for me and fanfic - lol.)

I can't say my fav parts because it was all good. I really loved how I agree with everything you've written here. How this was how it all happened. How Bill would act. How Laura would act. (In fact, I have written some stuff that is so similar to this that I haven't posted yet, it's scarey.)

One of my fav parts was Laura thinking they had got together because of their similar ages etc. That is such an interesting perspective.

Honestly - I really really loved this first chapter.

snoopy0917 March 3 2010, 03:50:34 UTC

How this was how it all happened.

This story is totally how I wanked the little details of season four in my head. I really hope it reads as plausible and true to character.

Laura thinking they had got together because of their similar ages etc.

I love the line of thinking for Laura. Especially when she's trying to justify everything to herself. It's an interesting and obvious road for her brain to take when she's sinking into her denial.

I'm really, really glad you're enjoying it. And I'm really touched that you're excited for the rest. I hope it lives up to the beginning!

bsg_aussiegirl March 3 2010, 06:17:25 UTC

Oh, and I forgot to tell you - hopefully I'm not sounding too much like TJ but I like how I can tell you love Bill from your fic. He's so gorgeously described. And I don't just mean physically (although that's good too - lol) but his charming little habits. Singing, touching etc. Love. (And I love how she keeps thinking how good the secksing was - lol.)

snoopy0917 March 3 2010, 13:58:23 UTC

I'm so glad I'm painting a picture of Bill for you. I really adore Bill. He's such a wonderfully flawed and complex character.

cely March 3 2010, 04:24:31 UTC

I am officially super hyped for this!!

snoopy0917 March 3 2010, 05:50:32 UTC

Oh wow, thanks! I hope it lives up to the hype.

tjonesy March 3 2010, 04:25:11 UTC

It's a really beautiful mood piece, snoopy0917. These were my favorite lines:

He was an idealistic idiot to think they could do this without complications ( ... )

snoopy0917 March 3 2010, 13:59:39 UTC

You picked out a few of my favorite bits. I'm so very glad you're enjoying it thusfar. :) And hope that I managed to sustain the mood over the other parts.