8 more days of this? I'm looking forward to it! This is a great start. I love fic set at this point in their relationship - everything's changing and they're trying to make sense of it, and of each other. You get that across so well!
The rooms looked the same on the surface. The substance remained unchanged, the evidence of her residence hidden around the edges. Subtle touches that wove easily into the fabric of his space and fit far too naturally.
everything's changing and they're trying to make sense of it, and of each other.
Exactly. There's so much that occurs in the subtext of these two. It's beautifully left open to interpretation. That was actually the impetus for the story. I wanted to write the moments in-between that we didn't get to see. I really hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Thank you so much for the lovely comment.
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LOL. I know right? I hit a bit of a RL detour, so it took me even longer to finish than I anticipated. But it's a better story for it. (I think)
I'm glad you're enjoying it!
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The rooms looked the same on the surface. The substance remained unchanged, the evidence of her residence hidden around the edges. Subtle touches that wove easily into the fabric of his space and fit far too naturally.
Gorgeous.
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Exactly. There's so much that occurs in the subtext of these two. It's beautifully left open to interpretation. That was actually the impetus for the story. I wanted to write the moments in-between that we didn't get to see. I really hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Thank you so much for the lovely comment.
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