Behind Every Man

[snowflakie06]

Title: Behind Every Man
Rating: PG-13 to be safe
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairings: Narcissa/Lucius and the familial relationship of Lucius, Narcissa and Draco
Length: 4,379 words
Summary: In the wizarding world, Lucius Malfoy comes off as just about the perfect man. Rich, accomplished, high up in society. But that's only when he's seen in public. In

Comments

Is it ok that I find it creepy and cracky at the same time?

[v_s_mycroft]

LOL, some of the things Narcissa does in here are so wonderful and canon-y. I love how Lucius' prized peacocks that he's so proud of in Book 7 were actually forced upon him.

And the parts with Draco are just hilarious. "Tell Mummy want you want." XD

At the same time, I was a little creeped out at some of Narcissa's antics. (In a good way.) XD The calling him "Lucy" part just made me imagine her as some kind of crazy kidnapper that renamed her victim. (Or is that the Criminal Minds talking?)

Thank you so much for taking this request!

Re: Is it ok that I find it creepy and cracky at the same time?

[snowflakie06]

You're welcome, I'm glad you like it! And it's totally fine that you find it creepy in a good way lol I meant for "Lucy" to be more of her affectionate nickname for him because if you notice, she uses it when she wants something or is trying to sound all sweet but as soon as she gets angry, she switches straight to "Lucius" but the scenario you imagined works just as well XD

[lumy12]

So I finally read this :) Good stuff! I love the "Lucy" nickname, and how everything fits into canon (Narcissa allowing Lucius to maintain his bad-ass rep in public) but she's clearly the pants-wearer in the family. No wonder Draco's a wuss!

I especially love your Dobby <333