Fic - Trust Me

Sep 22, 2007 14:17

Title: Trust Me
Characters: Jack/Ianto, Tosh, Owen and Gwen briefly
Rating: R
Summary: “This,” Jack said, waving his free hand at the Hub. “It’s not real. None of it is. Someone’s expecting me to just wake up here and carry on as if nothing unusual’s happened, but I know.”
Warnings: Murder

A/N: Again, I forgot to add in that this was betaed by _stolendreams_. ( Read more... )

fic, torchwood

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dr_is_in September 22 2007, 14:37:36 UTC
Beautifully written......very creepy and unsettling. Good work.

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snowwhiteliar September 22 2007, 23:15:56 UTC
Thank you very much. :) I'm pleased it worked!

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talaayn September 22 2007, 14:40:55 UTC
oh wow.
I was really dissapointed at first, because i thought it'd be one of those "and it was alllllll a dream" fics. The ending more than made up for it though. Absoloutly fantastic, and really creepy. Love it.

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snowwhiteliar September 22 2007, 23:32:35 UTC
:) I'd never do a "All a dream!" fic. All-a-dream-with-twist, however, is entirely another matter. ;) I'm very glad you liked it. Lots of people have said it was creepy, and since that was what I was going for, I'm quite delighted!

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likestowrite September 22 2007, 14:45:05 UTC
Disturbingly dark, you've really depicted Jack's darker side astonishing well.

The ending is heartbreaking though, but i love that about it

Bloody good show

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snowwhiteliar September 22 2007, 23:33:34 UTC
:) Thank you. Jack's dark side is wonderfully fun to play with. I'm very pleased you liked it, heartbreak included. ;)

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snowwhiteliar September 22 2007, 23:34:16 UTC
Thank you very much, I'm delighted you think so. :)

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badwolf36 September 22 2007, 16:22:27 UTC
Terrifying, creepy, and brilliant for it. You had quite the tension going in this story, all the way through. Very nicely done. Thank you so much for sharing!

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snowwhiteliar September 22 2007, 23:35:07 UTC
Thank you very much for reading and commenting! :) I'm delighted by your reaction - that's exactly what I was hoping for. ;) Thank you!

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