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bookster523 January 28 2008, 15:38:27 UTC
Wow. A very tense chapter. *sighs* Why do they always have to complicate things? Have a heart, Dresden.

Great work! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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snuggle_muggle January 28 2008, 20:52:16 UTC
Simple! Because if they didn't complicate things, there'd be no story! No, seriously, I know what you mean. Thanks for the review, as always. Don't worry, Dresden will come through. Doesn't he always?

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titacats January 28 2008, 15:50:54 UTC
Ooooh very nice. Now they just have to get along and play nice enough to go out and take care of the "demons". Karrin should sit them all down and give them a thorough talking to.

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snuggle_muggle January 28 2008, 20:54:20 UTC
Someone needs to -- either that or kick them in their respective butts. I think, since you brought it up, that she has the most interest in getting them to work together and solve these murders. Plus, of course, she thinks Sam and Dean are cute!

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seadreamer January 28 2008, 18:25:19 UTC
And oh, HELLO. If the Crossroads "Demon" is actually one of the fae, maybe Harry can intercede for Dean. Really great chapter!

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snuggle_muggle January 28 2008, 20:56:24 UTC
Thanks. I was happy with the way it turned out. Oh, yeah, their worlds get all nicely mixed up with each other in the story I've got outlined in my head. We'll see how it comes out on paper, er, screen. Thanks for reviewing.

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icarus_chained January 28 2008, 21:25:15 UTC
Oh, wow. 'Demon' really is too much of a catch-all term. My head's spinning slightly. But if they're going up against the Fallen ... Considering that Nicodemus almost creamed Harry, Michael and Marcone!, no offense to the boys, but I'm not gonna be placing any heavy bets on their survival. I just hope they and Harry are just getting terms confused, or else they've got some really *big* guns up their sleeves.

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snuggle_muggle January 28 2008, 22:13:14 UTC
Actually, the Denarians are part of the Fallen, but not all the Fallen are Denarians. The Denarians (ie, Lash and her cohorts) are really strong and powerful, but I think the Fallen angels in this story are strong, but not THAT strong. (I'm reasonably certain that all the Denarians are already out causing havoc rather than being locked up in Hell still.) I would give a Dresden/Winchester boys combo a pretty good chance against them. After all, the boys and Bobby have been excorcizing them pretty well up to this point even without Dresden's help in this mixed-up universe. So don't give up hope. Sorry about the spinning head. I just somehow had to solve the problems of the two different definitions of the word "demon" in the two universes as they really were originally two completely different concepts, and I think I worked out something that makes sense and will allow them to battle both of their enemies, but still be true to what makes their individual stories unique.

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icarus_chained January 28 2008, 22:38:06 UTC
Ah, right! You're going for 'really powerful bad-guy', rather than 'insanely, beyond-all-reason powerful', yes? Makes sense. I'd forgotten the lesser Fallen. Yeah, I can see that working.
And don't worry. My head's pretty durable, and now I've a handle on what you mean, so no probs!

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lelann137 January 30 2008, 04:03:01 UTC
oh wow, great chapter! love the interactions and how they seem to work ok, then spark. thanks for writing

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snuggle_muggle January 30 2008, 05:39:42 UTC
Thank you for the comment. I'm glad that the conversations and interactions come across well for you. That is something I realy do try to work on.

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