GIFT: The Arrangement (R), for the snuna_exchange

May 31, 2010 02:41

Title: The Arrangement
Author: iulia_linnea
Beta Readers: arynwy and leela_cat
Recipient: snuna_exchange
Rating: R
(Highlight to View) Warning(s): None.
Summary: Their Arrangement is only one of myriad reasons that Severus and Luna's marriage works.

The Arrangement )

author: iulia_linnea, 2010 gift, *fic, recipient: snuna_exchange

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miss_morland May 31 2010, 09:38:13 UTC
Oh yay! I love this so much -- I've been wanting a story dealing with Snape and Luna's differences for ages, and I just adore your take on it. :-D

Some favourite lines:

Three applications of Glumbumblecide later, she and Severus were drinking together at the Three Broomsticks; shortly after her seventh application of the insecticide to Severus' shoes, they were shagging.

Luna understood that no one but she understood her attraction to Severus; that made her happy because it meant no one was likely to try and take him from her. -- This is so perfect for the way I see this pairing.

A part of him that he tried not to listen to with any sort of attention whispered, This could have been you.

"My wife," Severus murmured, in that hoarse way of his that curled Luna's toes and meant "I love you."

Severus had appreciated their efficiency and the fact that neither one of them had remarked upon the apron, which he'd forgotten to remove before their arrival. -- Lol!

I love every bit of this story; thank you!

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snuna_author May 31 2010, 11:13:26 UTC
~dances about~

I'm so happy you do like it; thank you!

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insaneformality May 31 2010, 09:51:38 UTC
I enjoyed this. The ending made me smile with its sweetness and It's because I'm a lovely man, and Severus and Luna's relationship was delightful. I also liked your dialogue. Great work!

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snuna_author May 31 2010, 11:14:30 UTC
Thank you for your kind words; I'm glad I made you smile. ~pleased~

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lordhellebore May 31 2010, 10:49:16 UTC
Poor Mrs Witherston - but lucky for her that Severus indeed is such a lovely man :)

A part of him that he tried not to listen to with any sort of attention whispered, This could have been you.

You know, I can really see this, and the thought alone makes me sad. Good that he has Luna.

Luna understood that no one but she understood her attraction to Severus; that made her happy because it meant no one was likely to try and take him from her.

This is so Luna, and that made me happy.

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snuna_author May 31 2010, 11:18:06 UTC
If this hadn't been the snuna_exchange, I might have written so much more of Mrs Witherston; I'm contenting myself with the thought that Luna and Severus will take care of her in her declining years.

I think it really could have been Severus' fate to die alone and lonely but for Luna; thank goodness for her! I'm very happy that you liked this; thank you. :)

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lordhellebore May 31 2010, 11:21:36 UTC
I might have written so much more of Mrs Witherston

Well, there's always the possibility of a sequel ;)

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snuna_author May 31 2010, 11:23:16 UTC
True! ~grin~

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maggiecate May 31 2010, 11:20:47 UTC
"Winifred Witherston couldn't brew her way out of an apothecary!"

"Is she stuck in one?" Luna asked.

I love this! Packed full of delightful Luna-isms, and Severus really is a lovely man!

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snuna_author May 31 2010, 11:22:40 UTC
I'm so glad that you do! Thank you. :)

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snuna_author May 31 2010, 11:46:11 UTC
I think so, too. Thank you!

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